I loved - in you is an angel who is hiding their wings. the truth is ive been trying to find a way to put that and you beat me to it wow its amazing i really liked this poem it shouldnt be dissed coz its yours so dont let no one tell you how to change coz it wont b ur work then xxxxx

Hi Rachel, I like this poem, it has a lot of warmth.

I think the second stanza could be better as the third and fourth lines interrupt the even flow the poem has. Perhaps working on this could help it run more smoothly. Experiment with words and try to incorporate a new word with every poem, it will help your vocabulary and improve your verse which has clearly got a solid foundation.

Keep it up!

Bret