by Bill Turner Aug 8, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Slipping off my shoes, I creep through the door |
by sweetlips
Yowza! Iz alwayz did lik a litle roll play...iz yuz married? cuz im jus sayin, yuz got some spunk n i sur like the way yuz called it a gerber, iz neva herd it called dat befo. |
by Darien
Bill my friend, you took me for a really scary ride. Yet there was passion in this poem. It seemed to be a mixture of darkness then erotica. I thought that was creative. Very beautiful ending. |
by Lu
You've done it again Bill ....Got my heart all pounding, scared half to death with the imagery this poem created in the beginning....lol |
Wow Bill, awesome poem. It had me going to the end. Great story. Glad u hadn't snuck up on me like that, you may be hurting.lol 5/5 Always Loretta |
Wow i was guna dis u for writing bad shit like that but the endin made me giggle lol wow lol it was really good and it was very mind twisting lol i loved it |