by Choose xX Alex Xx Life Aug 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
* This is for my boy * (I'm sorri babe x) |
I liked the message in this poem it was very sweet and touching. But the way it was written, was a little off in some areas. The flow seemed forced, and a little to direct. And the writing its self needs a little bit more work. |
by NearlyCrazy6
I love it, way to go! I'm more for sad and dark poems...but I really like that one. I give it a 5! |
by Boy
Ahaaaaa.. true love shines from your words. nicely done. 5/5 |
Soo touching n deep!...great work on this 1!!...the rhymes,descriptions-just remarkable,excellent!!..i can relate too!! |
by Andi
U r a remarkable writer...i love how everything u write almos anyone in the world can relate to....good job |