Comments : Fairytale Love

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    I like it. I love how you use "one upon a time" in you poem. Great Job

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    I liked it I thought it was very sweet.
    I love how you wrote it like a story.

    -Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Great poem.

    My prince charming,
    Kissed myself awake,
    Took me away for a while,
    Gave my hurt heart a break.

    Yeah I like this bit.^
    Nice. 5/5

    xx.Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay.xx

  • 18 years ago

    by WriteLoveOnHerArms

    Awww. i luv it. itz so cute. i give it 5/5

    SheLLz

  • 18 years ago

    by unnoticedXlove

    Well even though you dont like it... i do lol. good job keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Misz Luving You

    Great poem i loved the fairytale theme it great 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    This is a mad as poem i love it keep it up ur really really good at it!!

    Luv -=3mz=-

  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    I think this is the poem from my contest not sure but commenting anyways i like it, it could be a little longer and the flow is slightly off in my opinion but it is still a good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I love it..i like how u wrote it like a story....very well written...keep up the good work

    Definate 5/5

    by the way i put up another poem

    Em