Thankz for participating in my contest!

Okay, the emotion in this poem was very powerful, however, I felt a little confused by it. It seemed you contradicted yourself a bit with your ideas. Saying that you want him to find someone ese and move on but yet you still need him? I don't know. It was good, just didn't get it. 4/5 =]

-Jenna.

This was really good. & Not confusing at all to me, lol. You did contradict yourself.. but I can totally relate. I 've been there & know what you mean! It had a lot of emotions in it. And flowed really well.

One thing though:

this spark of hatre [I think you meant 'hatred'] i'm not sure though.. Lol.

other than that, i really enjoyed reading this. Excellent job. Keep it up, Hunny.

Bri.x 5.5

Good job. Keep writing.