I like it alot, i like when you say zit, just cause its a funny word and it really is descriptive and it could mean just about anything, it depends on how you look at it i guess, but anyways really good poems! i love them and thankyou for commenting on mine!
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Kamille
AKA tomuchhurt

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if i didn't knw better i'd say i have a poem with this same title..
Go check it out if u want :D
good poem btw