by Sarah Ann Aug 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Packing...because I need to move |
by Megann Lee
Awh. That's really sad. Yet very nicely written. I liked the structure and flow of this one. I don't mean to like be "Ms. Grammar" freak, but I don't know if this matters, I am just pointing it out.. |
by Liz
I loved the title and the way you opened up the poem. This piece was just amazing. So much details and emotion and shtuff. lol Iunno what to say. I love it! Keep it up!! |
Oh jesus christ. Does your talent have no limit? Its frustrating. Grrr. I love it. I know i've done that before too. -sigh-. Wonderful, Sarah. |