Comments : Naked ( Lanturne)

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Quite profound my dear friend! Magnificent lanturne, I'm very impressed. Keep it up!
    Love ya~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I really like this

    for such a constraining format, i think you actually managed to express something! rock on

  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    I dont get it... lol please explain

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    What I meant was..we are all born from sin..naked...most of us wear our wounds in some context, outside..inside. therefore, we are naked. I hope this helps all who read this.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    I like the poem, its cool. bye.