Awww i like this poem even tho it dont rhyme lol
its really good...
and thanks for the comment and i appreciate u bein there for me if i need someone to talk to lol
well hope to read from u again!
~BYE~

Again, better job with the spacing. There's just one thing bothering me about it... You need to make "I" capital, instead of lower case. Other than that, AMAZING! Much love.

-*La Little Lor Lor*

I liked it. Thanks for commenting on mine. Let me know when you post more!!

Hey melly!!! Just lettin you know that i put a new poem on there. Check it out. It's called "All They Do Is Make You Cry" by the way i don't care if its an old poem. I love it!!