Lol i like it... its different and thats what i like!! keep it up =)

xoxo Lucy

Lol u know ur abc's keep on writing!!

Lol...one thing...you forgot the "Y"...he he he..looks like you need to work on those ABC"s...lol
Anyways...other than that...i was very confused by this..lol...were you trying to make any sense here?...Hmmm,..i tried to look for connections but i just couldn't find any...maybe if you gave each stanza a theme...well good poem..4/5...the 5 would have been there but there was something off about it...and you didn't do your research well...lol..meaning you forgot the y...heh...im not making fun of you, just incase that thought occured...i'm saying it in a joking way...if that makes any sense=D

Alright I couldn't connect much words here so I'm afraid I don't think I could rate it a five but the poem in itself was kind of funny. I mean, I love when people act random and at least we can say you know your abc's ;)

LOL! haha, that was hillariouss. you are so cute nelle! im gonna give you a 5/5 for creativity because there is honestly nothing else i can judge it by.. tehee..

Lol, very interesting piece I must say.
Actually, that's all I have to say. Never seen thise before, so nice unique poem.

Certainly different. Some of the words kind of linked and made some sense in an abstract kind of way. I guess you can make of it what you like kind of like a psychiatry test or something.
Umm. Nice.

Very Random, yet it makes you think. 5/5

Lol..I kinda like this. =P It's very... different.

I've never thought of writing something like this, looks pretty easy. =P Tehe. It's awesome! 5/5 Ily.

Natalie``

Its good to see poems that are different and this was definately different lol. You must be in a very random mood!!! hehehe

LOL well i have to agree with you on the random part, but it was funny and original tho! 5/5

Well at least we know u learned something in kindergarden...lol...jkjk

LMAO...ok normally I would think that was a waste of time and completely stupid but it was funny because it came out of now where..here I am on PnQ all day reading poems and I end up reading the alphabet! hahaha it was funny!
-Krissey

P.S would love your feedback on "Not every boy's a man"

Lol that was original yet very boring.. its the ABC's?!?!?!