Just Another Rhyme

by The Poetic Child   Aug 9, 2006


The same old thing
It's the same ol' word
screaming of a love
to a beautiful girl

It's the same We've heard
Its nothing really knew
Still screaming love
Screaming I love you

Ive been standing awhile
Being depressed and alone
Crazy and starting To smile
when I feel a vibrate on the phone

wishing it was her
and I end up ashamed
why am I the one
Who gets to be blamed

Like Shes The One Broken
Like Shes the One Crying
Like shes The one Hurt
Like shes the One Dieing

Its Me...
Its Easy..
Just Look..
And see..

walking a Lonely dark path
Theres no Light for me to see
Walking by a hopeless faith
cause theres no one next to me

Its just the same ol' thing
I've been through it all
Ive been up down left and right
everyones seen me fall

Same feeling of Love
just in a different time
Its the same ol' thing
Just another Rhyme..

*Dedication- For the men out there, who've just been constantly hurt all the time, to the point your us-to the feeling of waking up with tears of being sad. Live with what you have, there is always a reason to smile, can't let the thought of another keep you from being who you really are, or Putting on a smile preparing for a new day.. Best of luck to you Men*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mel

    Good poem! i really liked the rhyming, and it had good flow.

    "Walking by a hopeless faith"

    ^^^i really like that line alot. good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem! loved the emotion and details. congrats on gettin 3rd in my contest! amazing work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    What about the women who got hurt? jks...great poem! Nice emotions in this one
    Ending was great and the flow was perfect!
    Can't say much more to describe how good this is...
    Its Perfect! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nathan

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsey

    Oh my gosh! I LOVE this poem!!
    it's amazing! 1000/1000