I know how that feels, when you just want to go back in time when it all started because everything was so much better than!!! loved you poem!!!

xoxo Lucy

Aww.. this was kinda cute.. i think it would be better if you separated it into a few stanza's instead of one big one.. it had good descriptions though and the emotion was clear..

like you use to
^ should be "used" not "use"

keep it up! 4/5