Haha my eyes flip things around i thought it said twinkie lol great work! i lvoed the emotion and detialing! really painted a picture! congrats on gettin h/m in my contest! i loved it! 5/5

Omgod i love this.. it is amazing. i love the twinkle twinkle little scar part...its amazing, great idea! keep it up!
hayley

Omg, agreed with the twinkle twinkle theme thinger. it was so creative and amazing. Bravo!!

Really like this poem nice flow nice wording thanks for entering my contest nice job again