Plasticine

by Wings Of Flames   Aug 9, 2006


Plasticine covered heart,
A stench of lust and crime,
Socialists and mockery,
The dawn is yet to chime,

The trees are a plastic shame,
Grass is faker still,
Wooden tables are so hollow,
This is the dollar Bill,

Value of your pounds and pennies,
Shed numbers from the weight,
Wasted time? Injustice!
How did we maim our fate?

Fumigations of our homes,
Our towns are blown to bits,
Children playing in the streets,
Plasticine is all that fits,

Words of a different colour,
The end of this putrid time,
Gang war. Gang rape,
Our obscenity is so sublime.

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  • 18 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    You brought me back to the real world

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Nice imagry in this one. Loved it!

    I'm not to sure why all the poems I've read from you so far have been rated a little low, they seem pretty damn good to me.. anywho, I liked this one also. Nice flow, nice rhyming. A great job!

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Excellent again. really painted a picture again...u sure have a way w/ words...excellent. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hi emma. again, very kool : ) rock on. loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bethan

    I really like this poem, I thought it had a good, strong political message, nice flow and rhythm and great use of metaphor. I think this is th ebest of your work I have read recently as some of it has been a bit abstract formy tastes but this definitely showed ur skill as a writer, well done.
    Beth x

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