Amazing, ur a excellent poet with really meaningful words, 5/5

Wow good poem i liked it a 5 for me!!

I really like this poem. It has a nice flow and rhythm to it. And you worded it very well. My favorite stanza was probably the last one, but it was all very well written. Definitely a 5/5 on this. Great job!

Wow, u really have gotten alot better since i've read anything of yours. I really like the structure of this poem, there were one or two lines that didn't flow as good as the other, but no poem is perfect. I liked reading this. You've done a pretty good job with this and i'm happy for you that your poetry has really improved over time. 4/5.
Keep writing, only 3 more till u hit 100!

i actually meen what i've said, i'm not just trying to be nice.

President Dead

I really like this poem, I thought it had a good, strong political message, nice flow and rhythm and great use of metaphor. I think this is th ebest of your work I have read recently as some of it has been a bit abstract formy tastes but this definitely showed ur skill as a writer, well done.
Beth x

Hi emma. again, very kool : ) rock on. loved it.

Excellent again. really painted a picture again...u sure have a way w/ words...excellent. 5/5

Nice imagry in this one. Loved it!

I'm not to sure why all the poems I've read from you so far have been rated a little low, they seem pretty damn good to me.. anywho, I liked this one also. Nice flow, nice rhyming. A great job!

Natalie``

You brought me back to the real world