Feelings for you

by nathan   Aug 9, 2006


I wish I could tell you
How much u mean to me
But words can't even describe
On what I really see

Your so beautiful
I heart you in every way
These feelings that I have for u
Will never go away

Come into my arms
Let me hold you tight
Ill show you that I can be
The guy u can love everyday and night

Your so sweet
No girl can compare
What we have everyone would want
Because it's true and rare

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  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I really like the poem and it's very sweet... I would just suggest not using I heart you in every way....not big on using heart instead of love...other than that though it was great.
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by zarai

    I like thiz poem i wish i could find a boi like u

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    I like this poem its sweet and cute.
    Keep it up! *_*
    hope ya check out some of my poems sometime!
    ~bye~

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Perrty good
    umm only critique i can give on this
    is ummmm..
    try to make it FLOW..a wee bit more
    u know wat your sayin
    you kno what you mean
    now just try to put the words
    to make it flow so when it rhymes
    it Sounds much better
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jib

    Hey i think itz sweet luv it

    Lotza Luv x--xoxox---x

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