Hey i think itz sweet luv it

Lotza Luv x--xoxox---x

Perrty good
umm only critique i can give on this
is ummmm..
try to make it FLOW..a wee bit more
u know wat your sayin
you kno what you mean
now just try to put the words
to make it flow so when it rhymes
it Sounds much better
5/5
~MF~

I like this poem its sweet and cute.
Keep it up! *_*
hope ya check out some of my poems sometime!
~bye~

I like thiz poem i wish i could find a boi like u

I really like the poem and it's very sweet... I would just suggest not using I heart you in every way....not big on using heart instead of love...other than that though it was great.
~Jules