by Brittany C
Awe beautiful peom. love it. another 5/5 |
Another great poem, ur such a talented writter, ur style is unique, i love all ur poems, they r such a joy to read... |
I love this poem especially this part |
I really loved this poem, my fav line was "Into Darkness. |
Wow, this was absolutely beautiful, I was blown away by how well written this was. you really have talent. This poem painted a dark picture in my mind, and I think I know exactly what you were trying to say. It was beautiful. |
I forced myself to read this poem.. it was OK. The emotion was good.. but the flow was horrible. Good luck next time? |
by Jenni
Wow. this poem wrapped together very lovely. i loved your word choice and the rhythm in my mind was great! keep up the awesome work. 5/5 |
by Leanne
Yet another great poem, i think i'll put you on my faves i've really enjoyed reading your work, your flow was spot on and the rhyming was good too! |
Wow.. i lovelovelovelove this poem.. no suggesntions.. nothing .. i LOVE IT!! its amazing.. just wow.. the flow and the words it all just fits together perfectly! |
by amoxi
This poem was deep and heartfelt i loved the emotion u put in it very good 5/5 |
by Michelle18
Wow! another excellent poem... your ryhming in this poem was great...i loved it. |
Great, nice flow, 5/5 |