Comments : Trapped In Time

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Awe beautiful peom. love it. another 5/5

  • Another great poem, ur such a talented writter, ur style is unique, i love all ur poems, they r such a joy to read...

  • 17 years ago

    by Tragic Misery

    I love this poem especially this part
    Open my box,
    let me soar.
    Bring me back,
    the wings he tore.
    you explain everything really beautifully

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    I really loved this poem, my fav line was "Into Darkness.
    Satan condemned me" Also the last verse was pretty good 5/5 well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow, this was absolutely beautiful, I was blown away by how well written this was. you really have talent. This poem painted a dark picture in my mind, and I think I know exactly what you were trying to say. It was beautiful.

    --Steph

    By the way, thank you for the comment on my poem:)

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I forced myself to read this poem.. it was OK. The emotion was good.. but the flow was horrible. Good luck next time?

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. this poem wrapped together very lovely. i loved your word choice and the rhythm in my mind was great! keep up the awesome work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Yet another great poem, i think i'll put you on my faves i've really enjoyed reading your work, your flow was spot on and the rhyming was good too!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. i lovelovelovelove this poem.. no suggesntions.. nothing .. i LOVE IT!! its amazing.. just wow.. the flow and the words it all just fits together perfectly!

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was deep and heartfelt i loved the emotion u put in it very good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! another excellent poem... your ryhming in this poem was great...i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Great, nice flow, 5/5