If this is right

by nathan   Aug 9, 2006


If this is right
Then let me know
If you don't want me
Then let me go

My hearts in pain
From knowing your thinking about another guy
If this is true
Then tell me why

Why did you lie
It feels like you cheat
Now you love someone else
Who isn't me

Ill tell you this once
Your making a mistake
Please don't let this be another lie
Don't be another heartbreak

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Well it is simple but says a lot..and i know how bad that can hurt! ahh so anyways even tho its simple its very good 5/5 keep it up..ur pretty good at writing...

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Its good.
    but its Simple..
    Simplicity is Good..
    but yet you might wanna pound
    some Big Detailed words in there
    You know the feeling of a heartbreak
    Describe it well..
    Youll get alot more votes
    trust me
    5/5
    ~MF~

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