Cherri

by Randomness   Aug 9, 2006


Cherri.
I got to mad easily at you,
It made you sad you and you felt bad
Im sorry it was my fault. I know

We are still friends and have been for a while
nothing
I mean nothing will ever change that.

We're friends today cause we trust each other
we look out for one another
We are like sisters

I look at you in more of a sister way then a friend way
Cause you treated me like a sister
We fought like sisters
and we always make up

I love you like a sister
I look up to as my big sister
Nothing will EVER change that.

TO my friend Cherri

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cherri

    Thanks For Being There For Me In The Tough Times, I will always Love you like a sister

    Cherri,
    Your Sister By Friendship

  • 18 years ago

    by Cherri

    Thanks For Being There For Me In The Tough Times, I will always Love you like a sister

    Cherri,
    Your Sister By Friendship

  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    I believe there are to many I's and We's in this poem.

    "Cherri.
    I got to mad easily at you,
    It made you sad you and you felt bad
    Im sorry it was my fault. I know"

    see what i mean. in those four verses there are 3 I's (I'ms included) and two you's.

    try and write with less of them and your poetry will reach higher levels.

    ~Terra

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