Thts soo sad great poem...and thx for commenting on my poems really apperciate it!!

It didn't rhyme, but it had a really nice flow to it... And the poem itself was pretty good. Nicely done.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I liked this one a little better... It was more catching to the eye and flowed a little better.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

"My whole world is crashing down on me
Smothering me with it's lies and deceit
Until I've been wasted away into nothing
And I am forced to admit my defeat"

An absolutely perfect stanza. Great work. The flow wonderful.

Exellent poem.. i really could relate and feel the pain in this one