Fade To Black

by Jessica   Aug 9, 2006


Hearts were gracefully entwined
Eyes slowly drawn to each other
Love so strong it made them blind
Knowing there could never be another..

Each delicate kiss told of their love
Every soft stare showed their devotion
Beauty fluttered around them like a dove
Flowing throughout their souls like the ocean..

One dark dawn, the sickness was exposed
He had but a few more days to live
Her heart was now eternally closed
For this, God she could never forgive..

Treasuring each other and their love
Her distraught heart was starting to crack
They shared one last kiss as he floated above
And their souls slowly faded to black..

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh my god.. This reminds me so much of my current situation it gave me such chills.. Amazing job.. so sad.. -tears up-.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wolf

    That was pretty lovely,i loved the contrasting parts of the song,and the rhyme is pretty well put too

    wish you more of making nice poems like this ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Hmm...this poem didn't really...say much to me. It looked like a whole bunch of words crammed together in some places. Although it's probably just me, I DID like a few lines in it.

    [Treasuring each other and their love
    Her distraught heart was starting to crack
    They shared one last kiss as he floated above
    And their souls slowly faded to black..]

    ^^ My favourite stanza. It kind of said what I feel sometimes, but I just can't really descibe it very well. Great write. =) 4.3/5

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by ! CLAIREEE.

    OMGSH! you are very talented. i love this poem. it's very.. expressive. you're an excellent poet. you deserve an award. keep up the beautiful poems. you're an inspiration to us all. :D

    Love Claire. x o x o

  • 18 years ago

    by Special k

    Oh my godd i love this poem its so inteanse...its awesome...i love your writing i read a couple of your other poems..but its amazing..keep writing it makes me happi..Lolz 5/5
    ♥Kiki♥

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