Its a long poem, but i glad i read it until the end, i loved the beginning and the ending they really did wonders for the powm, you wrote it so well, great write, keep it up 5/5..please read and rate my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx

Pretty good. Keep writing!

~~spanish367

This poem has some real power behing these words and i think the first guy the one the girl loved first is the right one even if he didnt seem like it in the beginning

keenan