by Sophie Aug 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
No other words can describe how I feel since I have parted with you, |
by Jessica
Awwww.. this was so sad and sweet.. i loved it.. the flow wasn't great but the descriptions and emotion that flowed throughout were beautiful.. nice job! 5/5 |
Awwah, wow, such an emotional and heartfelt poem, you wrote this well, it sent tingles down my spine! amazing write! loved the ending! i hope that this is not a true stor tho its very sad! hope you can check out some more of my poems, i am sure i will do the same to you.. thanks..ill put you on my favs lol..Kirsty xx |