Awwah, wow, such an emotional and heartfelt poem, you wrote this well, it sent tingles down my spine! amazing write! loved the ending! i hope that this is not a true stor tho its very sad! hope you can check out some more of my poems, i am sure i will do the same to you.. thanks..ill put you on my favs lol..Kirsty xx

Awwww.. this was so sad and sweet.. i loved it.. the flow wasn't great but the descriptions and emotion that flowed throughout were beautiful.. nice job! 5/5