by Rachel Aug 9, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Mum you gave me a place on earth |
by Bridgette
I really like this. It's very sweet and it's great to see someone who actually appreciates their parents. You did a wonderful job on this, and I like the last stanza, very imaginative. Great job on this! 5/5 |
by kyliecat009
I like it but i think this peom needs a little bit of work. I dont like the flow of it... |