Aw.. this is such a sweet poem. I loved it from beginning to end. And the way that you ended was very good and fit well with the rest of the poem. But you did a really good job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

That was an awsome poem! it really proves your love!!! great use of words too!!!

I liked the ending lines. =) ..They were sweet. Tehe. This was a beautiful, heartfelt poem. Very niiiice. It also put a smile on my face, which I needed! ..Awesome work. Your poems are great! And thanks for your kind comments, means alot. xx. 5/5

Natalie``

Awww that was soo cute, I can definitely relate to this alottttt...you said what i'm thinking perfectly!! your imagery was excellent! great job! 5/5

Awwww thats so sweet!!! i loved the flow!!! great job hunny!!! 5/5

xoxo Lucy

I really like what's here, but feel you could make this longer. The pacing is great and you did some great word choices. My suggestion would be to use this as a rough draft and add to it sometime!

Great poem very heart warming