It sounds better as a song, but I still hope its a joy for you all to read. Because it came from the deepest part of me, my heart. Enjoy

Wow this is great and soo soo thoughtful. i have tried to write songs and its sooo hard, u did well

A very nice talent showed here, great job i really enjoyed reading it.

Ive written some Songs too.
Great job..
good chorus,
Good words
True love..
Great job
5/5
~MF~

OMG I LOVE THIS SONG SOOOOOO MUCH I REALLY DON'T NO WAT TO SO THAT WAS AMAZING YOU ARE REALLY REALLY TALNTED
aunabeth

Aw, heh heh. I wish a girl would write something like that to me. It means alot and I know your guy here means everything to you. You deserve this happiness. Good stuff. :)