I really enjoyed this poem. 5/5 Keep it up

THank you for writing a poem from my title, it was magnificent in every way, it is always great too see people write something from a title that I just could not do, so cheers to you, it was quite a treat. Timothy r

Beautifully penned! I love the way this is worded, awesome title as well though you can't take credit for that...lol.
Love ya~Holly

Beautiful. Simple, and yet so sweet. Well done. xx

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This was so good...so much feeling. I very much love your work. So much talent in every piece! Great job and if you keep writing I gaurantee I'll keep reading :)!
~Midnight Sun

Not your best, I think it needs somthing else, though I cannot say exactly what. It seems too...cheesy? No, I don't know. Forced, maybe.