by Kristina Aug 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You told me you loved me, |
Then should be than |
by Tammie
Oh hun, that's terrible. It's even worse that you got your heart broken the first time, then again. It's hard enough to give it away again after getting it broken, let alone doing it for it to be broken again. I'm sorry it happened to you. You wrote an excellent poem out of it though. Pure emotion is the best to write off. Great poem. =] 5/5 |
by Robie Lincer
It is a good poem! loved how you wrote it! and it flowed real good! |