Yea abortion is never good! its against the bible too ,,, "Thou shal not kill" and always follow whats best for you...

Great poem loved it lots

Keep it up!

5/5

Awh, that was so sad.. The flow was good as were the descriptions.. The emotion was oozing from every line and was very inspirational..

They say you're to young,
^ It should be "too" not "to"

I know it's no what you want,
^ I think it should be "not" not "no"

Great job hun! 5/5

Thats sad...but thats what my sperm donar did at the time when i got pregnant too...and my mom...she wanted me to have an abortion and iw as 16 when i found out but guess what i did the right thing...and today im sooo glad i have her shes the best thing ever more then i can imagine be there for your freind..she really needs you iwish i had someone that would of been that nice to me when i got pg everyone just deserted me..my daughter will be 4 in jan goodluck! I'm getting married next week not to my sperm donar either your freind can make it

I really like this, it conveys the pressure that is put on girls if they get pregnant, surprisingly though i am amazed that it is only the mother that usually gets put under this torment!

This was so amazing. i dont believe in abortion either. i'm gald she didnt go through with it. 5/5