This poem is awsum 5/5 your a relli good writter! oh and thanx 4 commenting on my poems to!

Thats really truly amazin...
it sounds like my life lol
Luvya loads xxx

I really like it...It goes into the question of why is she so depressed when she has a good life...I ask my self that question alot...It was great!! :)

Another great poem, I can really relate to this.. I always questioned myself to why. especially because it seemed that everybody else had good reasons to be depressed and I had none.. well that was a while ago now.. i don't question it so much these days as I know it can happen to anybody at anytime, there does not have to be a reason.. sorry for the long comment lol.. another 5/5 xx

This is an excellent poem so keep up the great work.- Lampyadam

Yeah thanks for the comment, some of ur stuff is pretty good. I mainly rap but im on this site for my chick to her home much i love her. much respect

jordan

Wow, ive felt this way so many times. this poem flows reli well and the rhyming is gud. wel dun hun, keep it up. n fnx 4 commentin sum of my poems xxxBETHxxx

This is an ace poem. can really relate to it. well expressed and written. good job 5/5 keep writing =]

Wow this is good i can relate to it

I like this one, i can really relate to it. i didnt really get the sleep thing though, that might drag on a little but other than that it was great!

Thx for the comment =) i can relate to this poem and it flowed freely great job. keep up the awsome job
5/5

Incredible!
I can also relate tp the part where she has a good life but is still depressed...
Anyway, good job!

This is an actually good poem...
especially cos it carries some charge... its undescribeable... but its a rlly good one
especially bout the forced unhappy smile
well keep on writing the good stuff

Its true its real life until you've been there words can't describe it Steve

Amazing...and oh so true.