Comments : Why smile?

  • 18 years ago

    by Denise

    I liked this one too.....i agree

  • 18 years ago

    by XxSilentScreamXx

    Cute and a great way of expressing a smile.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ankit V Master

    Profound thought...

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. But try and keep the lines close to the same length. 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    While I agree with you about this not really being a poem its not bad. this is more of an inspirational piece of writing that I'm glad you shared with us. I liked this because sometimes a simple smile is all a person needs to go from having a bad day to a good day. Very creative and nice idea. I'm glad that you shared this with us. I only have one spelling correction and its more of a typo than anything else "connotes= connects". I think that the little explination at the end of the poem isn't needed you should just let the reader take it however they want, if they view it as a poem or not that's their decision.