by Denise
I liked this one too.....i agree |
Cute and a great way of expressing a smile. |
Profound thought... |
by Brittany C
Great poem. But try and keep the lines close to the same length. 4/5 |
While I agree with you about this not really being a poem its not bad. this is more of an inspirational piece of writing that I'm glad you shared with us. I liked this because sometimes a simple smile is all a person needs to go from having a bad day to a good day. Very creative and nice idea. I'm glad that you shared this with us. I only have one spelling correction and its more of a typo than anything else "connotes= connects". I think that the little explination at the end of the poem isn't needed you should just let the reader take it however they want, if they view it as a poem or not that's their decision. |