That was good keep writin and ull get better

So short of a poem but the strength of ot and the emotions r unreal. wow, its jus.. well i dont even have words to explain.. love it tho!!

Hey that is the truth. i feel that way someways

Love , is a very strong feeling , but regardelss of what they say , love is a living force that root in our heart till his every piece of sace in it ..

when the love die , the heart jsut cease to beat .. and the mind trying to reive it is a painfull process that the heart go trhough ...

you poem was simple short and nearly perfecet rhyming ,

it was very pleasurfull to read ^_^