by Hayley Aug 9, 2006
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
Disappointments knocking on your door |
I really liked this poem it was good keep it up and keep writing and im sure ill keep reading :):):) |
by BrokenMisery
Its nicely done, the rhymes were unforced which was good. I felt a lot of what you're saying has been quite over done in the past but its still a nice piece with lots of emotion. |