This is the last one I'll comment on; you might not even like my comments so...but anyway...liked this one, especially part about green eggs and cheese or something like that. Would have been good to include another line from this to tie it all together right at the end. hey, there's a short story by Margarette Atwood about a girl in this same situation and she ends of feeling the same way. I wondered if you'd been inspired. Keep it up. I like your stuff.