by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Aug 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I woke up in the morning, |
by Ashla
This is excellent! 5/5 |
Whoa. This just came to you in school?! -shivers- I would cry just thinking about that. =( This poem has LOADS of emotion. But I think it should be in the Dark Poems category. Just because of how you described all the feelings. So sad a shootout would be... |
by Just Lucy
Awwww that is so sad, u did a good job with the feeling and emotion especially since you didnt know first hand, it felt real to me... good job!!! 5/5 from me =) |