Awwww that is so sad, u did a good job with the feeling and emotion especially since you didnt know first hand, it felt real to me... good job!!! 5/5 from me =)

xoxo Lucy

Whoa. This just came to you in school?! -shivers- I would cry just thinking about that. =( This poem has LOADS of emotion. But I think it should be in the Dark Poems category. Just because of how you described all the feelings. So sad a shootout would be...

5/5 =) xoxo

Samantha

This is excellent! 5/5