Distnet

by crystal   Aug 9, 2006


I feel dis-tent from u more and more each like if my life is being riped away it seems like cutting my vanes is the only way to escape this pain everyday more and more tear drops roll down my face tear drops that will soon turn into blood
a sign of our crushed love

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Wow, this is actually quite good. =) try stanzas, its easier to read. =)

    keep writing, u have potential,
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Wow... so beautiful yet sad. 5/5 even though ur poem is short it flows and expresses alot of emotion. well done. keep writing

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