O wow i really like this.. i feel like this too. u have talent. i honestly love htis poem.. keep on writing hunn i love ur poems..
take care
luve angie

Wow really good really deep
~courtney~

Wow, this is such a poignant poem. quite unique, and very touching.

spelling error?
"A smile is painted on you face"

wonderful poem, i offer my best wishes,
xxx

Very beautiful willow. You know how to make a picture from words that feel so much. I love you

Love Niquee
xoxoxoxoxo

Your poem is amazing! You sound like an awesome and passionate writer. Keep writing and leave me some comments if u want!

~Jay~

I loved the was that you finished your poem with a stanza already used it was a good ending not rushed i did think that the repitition in this poem was working well it showed potential well done xxx alex xxx

I enjoyed the usage of repeition of a word/phrase at the beginning of each stanza...they way you made the repeated words portray alterior ideas was magnificent

Normally i don't like the use of so much repetion in a poem , but you made it work very well, and it just made the poem work ,
very well done
keep it up :)

This one is great!

Wow... powerful... it kept meh reading!!!! great job!!!
~*~Skye~*~
5/5! ^o^