Fast visit

by xxmichaelxx   Aug 9, 2006


The world spinned so fast
the day became night
as the evil and nice contrast
the earth collided with it with all it's might

as the children scream
as the parents tries to figure out what to do
there's a bolt of gleam
in the clouds it went through

the people trembled
as they can't believe what they see
angels and devils duelled
but it was a bit blurry

the land cracked
rains came showwering down
the angels and devils attacked
then a blink later no trace found

they were gone
the cloud went to their right places
the battle fight was done
brainwashed was the look on the peoples faces

all of them went to their houses
like nothing happened
as the day brushes
after the war everything brightened

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow thts really good....keep on writing!!!!!!! u write soo much tht u mite hav another award soon!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    This poem was really unique..like always. Although it was a different style for you. I have come to look forward to getting on and reading your new poems...I think I have missed a few though lol. Thank you so much for the comments...I hope me and Sem are friends forever too and the guy I wrote the birthday poem to was my boyfriend (^_^) Ashton.
    You did a great job on this one.
    5.5
    Breanna