No longer

by Brittany   Aug 9, 2006


I use to think i needed you,
needed to hear your voice,
look into your eyes,
feel my hand in yours,
and taste your kiss.

But no longer do i need you,
well ever since he has came a long,
i hear his soft voice,
no longer need to hear yours.
i look in to his beautifull eyes,
no longer do i need to look into yours. i feel my hand in his,
no longer need to feel mine in yours.
i tase his sweet kiss,
no longer need to taste yours.

Cant you see,
i no longr need you,
i have him.

PPL PLZ VOTE N RATE THIS PLZ!!!!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by χ-я.ι.α-χ

    Hey, what a beautiful poem! But it could use a little work. It flows well, but perhaps you might want to seperate it into stanzas. Although its not neccissary. Another thing is that you might want to take a look at some gramatical mistakes at the bottom of your poem. like this:
    "feel my hand i his," and
    " i tase hi sweet kiss"
    other than that, i think its an amazing poem. and its really beautiful. :) xxx

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