by BrOkEnHeArTeD15 Aug 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Ever since the day we first met i never knew we would be best friends i never knew that i would love you and always to to the end. but i never knew u would be the one to break my heart, i never knew the pain a broken heart sends. |
by BlueJay
I love this piece it has a beautiful flow and grest choice of words. There is some description and detail which you executed very well. The emotion here is fabulous. For it being ypur first piece here it is wonderful. I really do love it, and hope to see much more. One last thing, the ending could have been a tad stronger. |