Comments : Up beat

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I really liked this one too...I'm happy to see that you are starting to write a few happy (or at least not sad) poems again. Great job. xD
    5/5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I just wanted to tell you that I loved this quote you have...it's great...sadly I can relate to it. lol

    You tore me apart
    especially my heart
    i'm so mad about it
    but when we meet
    somehow the madness goes away
    as you come back to me again
    and lay
    in my shoulder
    with me no bother
    what's going on?
    aren't we done?

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I really liked this poem it was good keep it up and keep writing and im sure ill keep reading :):):)

    plz vote some of my poems plz and giv me some feedback thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)