This is so sad and so full of love at the same time.It does have a song-like quality to it, very well written and expressed.A beautiful piece of love, loss, despair and yet hope and resignation.Very well done and emotionally expressed in such a unique way.

GaryJ

Aww! I LOVE these lyrics so much! They mean a lot to someone! Aww I can really tell how passionate you are. =) Great job. The flow was good, rhymes rhymed well...the usual stuff lol. 5/5 =) xoxo

Samantha

Awh. I loved these lyrics Noni. Very nicely written and they flow really good. Now I realllly want to hear it to music. Or something. Haha. Anyway lovely job as usual. :]