Oh, a very sad poem, I hope it is not ur true story cause it is very painful, Hope things are ok with u.
as far as the poem goes, very well written by a perfect talented poet, great job
keep it up
5/5

Omg.. this was amazing.. terrible, but amazing.. this poem was so full of emotion that it felt as if i was there with you.. your details were so descriptive that i could see, hear, smell, feel what you were feeling.. this is what a true poem should be! great job! 5/5

Wow. very sad but powerfully written good flow and word choice great descriptions i felt i was there too xxALLYxx

Thats a strong poem! i mean i was reading it and i mean thats real mean :( i hate that! your poem was well written, but i hate when someone rapes another its nasty and mean! and heartless!

Keep it up!

That was a wonderful poem, but I do hope that it was not true... You really expressed your emotions well... one thing i've never liked, i don't like when ppl write poems in paragraphs... but that's just me, i absolutely loved the poem though, wonderful job i gave it a 5/5!

So sad... So excellent. Shows a lot of emotion and you're bold for writing it.
Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow. That was some poem. The ending was really poowerfull and somewhat haunting. I like the style it fits the theme well and really paints terrible images.
Hope you get through this ok *hugs*

A true sad right especially when the people you trust the most decide they know what's best for you, even if taking advantage of somone is their idea of the best for them. And true about people sometimes turning their backs, believing that the victim said yes. :(

Very well written. And if this is really about you, I'm sorry and I know how you feel. You did great. Perfect way to let out your emotions.

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

.. wow .. Im speechless .. ~if this seriously happened to you... omg!~ This is a 100000/5. again.. im speechless.

Wow great piece like you said the form are different but then you made it great by the line you use on this one
the flows are alright and feelings are always there very good 5/5

geneross

Omg. This was so sad. And I hope to god this really didn't happen to you. I be here if you ever need someone to talk to, kay?

The poem itself though was amazing. There was so much detail, and the emotions were just pouring out. An Excellent write, indeed. It was fantastic. Keep it up hun, and smile. 5/5

Natalie``

Very descriptive heartstopping poem! I just wish you could put it in a poetry format.

I know how i fell i was rap its the age 12 and still people don't believes me they i said no and they was like ya right u say yes and i tell them over and over and i said NO BUT they still dont believe me and its hard on dill with

Good job. This was very well done.

Wow,
i'm so sorry dear.you tell that story so well.i dont think i couldve even come close.beautiful work.
--lexie

p.s.i believe you said no.

That was wow, I'm left speechless. I have no words for this poem. It was so powerful, I could feel your every emotion.
Love you.
Love,
Heather x Emo With Megan :]]

Very thought provoking. This is intense, and it should be. I was moved.

Exstatic poem!!
one small spelling error that i noticed in the last stanza :
"I cry out, in fear, the people who I thought I trusted now have turned *theirs* backs upon me."
i think you meant :
"I cry out, in fear, the people who I thought I trusted now have turned *THEIR* backs upon me."
sorry, it might have been pointed out..but i didnt read the other comments.
Anyways the rest of the poem was like silk, the words flowing softly in my head. Even if there was no rhyming it was the perfect flow!! WOW..great poem! 5/5

Wow. GREAT poem! It was so sad though. Great write. It really was filled with lots of emotion. I hope this actually didn't happen. =( 5/5 xoxo

Samantha