Omg...this poem made me cry...it was so sad...you put so much emotion into it...it was like i could feel your pain...i am so sorry if this happened to you...are you serious? nobody belives it was rape? i'm so sorry...you did such an excellent job puting your thoughts into this poem...5/5.

stay strong hun...don't let that jerk ruin your life forever...though i'm sure it hard...if you ever want to talk pm me.

Sorry computer won't let me vote.

Extremely sad poetry/prose. Your write was amazing, and your words were simple, but painful and effective. My emotions were struck deeply while reading this. If it is true, I am so sorry. Punishment for him will come with time, as it did for the one who hurt me. Keep up your great work! 5/5

Wow.......thts really descriptive and really good...keep on writing!!!

Such power... your words... the phrases.... the emotion you send is just mind blowing. sheer genius. 5/5

Hey this is so sad, im so sorry for what heppened to you, he had no right to to that to you. Well done 5.5
love mel

It almost made my cry :( but it made me furious that someone could do such a thing :(

Im trying to find the words to tell you how your poem made me feel. They continue to allude me. It was beautiful work, about one of the worst things that can be done to a person. After reading that, I believe you to.

Woah.. thats so powerful. You wrote this perfectly, making it seem so real for me reading it. Your use of description and imagery was just amazing, i could picture it all, as terrible as it was. You did an excellent job. I'm sorry if that is a true story, you don't deserve it, no one does. Keep up the good work. 5/5

"You go to glide "
[Take out 'go to' it really wrecks the opening of the poem]

"myself back wards"
['backwards' is one word]

"it pushing me harder "
[it 'pushes' me harder. Or take out 'it']

"And a sudden "
[Take out 'And'. Avoid starting sentences with 'and']

"dirtied a unstoppable pain"
['an' unstoppable]

Well, that was a very tragic story, and it was really sad to hear it was about rape. I honestly think it's such a horrible thing, taking advantage of a person. I looked at the title, and it didn't make sense for a while. Until I read the end, which definitely brought the entire poem around. It was not poetic, it was more of a story. However, it was very well written, and you really worked hard on this. You put a lot of emotion into this poem, and I can see that. So well done, thanks for sharing your story. Great poem.

HOLY CRAP. I definitely know how you feel. and exactly what you are trying to say. This touched my heart deeply. I am so sorry if this is true. I know the pain you get with it. Stay strong though. It will get easier down the road. I loved your description here. the imagery was heartwrenching. great job!

I've already voted and commented on it before, but i read it again..and the sroce doesnt change.,.its a 5/5 all the way:)
its really a beautiful poem in a sad way...its amazing!!

How very tragic... A good write all the same, though.

Wow.. Megan. That.. was amazing. I loved the emotion and depth you put toward this piece. I know how it feels. Um, if you ever need anything.. you can talk to me. LOVE YOU. =) 4.7/5

Omg i hope that isn't true! this poem was amazing you really know how to express yourself, n i love the way you ended it! I did not say that one simple word.. "Yes". That truly is amazing!

This was really sad, but as far as the poem goes it was good, structure seems a little rocky but i liked it.

Reading this poem brought up many emotions...most namely, anger. Anger that something like this would go unnoticed, and that people won't believe that you didn't say yes. (assuming this is a true story, which I sincerely hope it's not). I don't like free or blank verse most of the time, but this was great. It was filled to the brim with emotion, and was almost overflowing. great job

The same exact thing happened to me with someone that I thought was my 'best friend'. Totally wrong on that one. I like it though, even though it isn't about the most joyful topic in the world. :)

Nice poem and nice story.. i really feel the emotion... quitely touch my heart very nice job! i feel a little sadness in this poem flow was so good i think it written well so keep up the good work and i believe u can write more god bless5/5

This poem is very moving . I especially like the way you accented your point at the end to deliver a powerful message