It's strong, powerful. I very much enjoyed it, but it also scared me. That proves that you are a good writer, well done!

Gosh.. another tragic poem. another beautiful tragic poem. you have a gift for poems, dear. and I really hope you didn't go through this. again, I'm speachless at your work.

I was literally speechless at the end of this poem, it is absolutely heart-wrenching and I can still feel the tears welled up in my eyes. Absolutely fantastic, and I am so sorry if this truly happened to you. You don't deserve to be treated like that.

Wow thats powerful, its really good x x x

Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

The more poems I read of yours the more I like them and this one was ...really sad....how do u come up with your poems?

This poem was so fantastic and heartfelt, the ending is very sad and painful but it was still an amazing write. I thought even though it was long it was excellent the whole way through and definately worth it. Amazing job with this piece 5/5 GG23

This didnt flow to well for me when i was reading it but apart from that it was a good read. keep the poems coming.
4/5

I am utterly speechless. That has to be one of the most emotional pieces of poetry that I have ever read. It was so heartbreaking to read.. I hope that it isn't true. Wow. O_o. Overall: 5.5 <-- Trust me, I'd give you more if I could. Lol. :)

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Damn thats Fuk'd up. it gets me mad but besides that it was a good poem. 5/5 man thats just crazy.....

Wow.. this is really good.. i like the ending.

flow was good. i liked it.

5/5

Wow, this is an amazing poem i have to say. and if this is true, im sorry this happened, i don't understand some guys where you say no and they keep on doing it, it makes me think that they think your going to give in after you say no a couple of times but its not true, you just let it happen because they won't hear you when you keep on screaming i had something like this happen to me before and it wasn't good, i mean after he did it to me he realized he did sorta rape me and he felt sorry for like 2 minutes and just let it go, like what the hell you know.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.