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by Lady Nik
Hello new friends I'm standing in the corner Of a room alone again How are you Does my name really matter It's just a week or two *This is confusng. I wouldn't start a song like this. And I would reword the third line it messes up the flow* Remember me No forget it And all of our memories The good and the bad The moments we had In which we were really close *Okay things get better here, I'd change the last line, doesn't seem right* (Chorus) It's like grasping the wind Holding on tightly But holding nothing Like moths to flame You get to close With only yourself to blame *It should say "You get too close" other then that this part is the best.* Goodbye Its all just a blur Gone bye A year later We've forgot the reasons We hated her *Okay the emotions change her and I'm not really sure why. Maybe you should explain why. And the part where you said "Gone Bye" is a little awkward.* Is it important Friends from the past Was it worth it Do they still care Is their heart there Or do they even remember your face *This part is a little random. I like that you used rhetorical questions though. Makes me think* (Chorus) It's like grasping the wind Holding on tightly But holding nothing Like moths to flame You get to close With only yourself to blame You justify The reasons why You leave your friends You swore till the end You hypocrite You're full of it You're so selfish And that isn't, just isn't *I thought this one was stronger than the rest. It seems like it flowed better and was so much deeper* (Chorus) Like grasping the wind Holding on tightly But holding nothing Like moths to flame You get to close With only yourself to blame