Wow! i love it!, it's soo true kike you said, and it's deep too!^^

WOW! so full of emotion. u've got telent my friend. i like it. 5/5 ur good.
keep it up.
love willow xxoo

Very well done, flows well and the rhyme works very well aswell
it is indeed not 100% clear what it's exactly about, but that's indeed sometimes very good in poetry and takes nothing away from the quality of the work
so, i'd say ,make more of these :)
keep it up :)

Wow thats really deep.... i feel u, lol wish i can write sumtin like that keep it up 5/5 - flip05 =)

OMG! I LOVE THIS! xD I really did love it! ^_^ It was terrific!

[Steel eyes pursue a definite shudder,
Her heart, his hand, the twist so concise.]
^^My favourite part. Oh me gee. This is one of the best dark poems I've read ever! xD The flow was great, the rhymes were superb, the vocab was well done, and the imagery was excellent! Lol. I don't have enough words to describe it. >.< Great write. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha